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DuoExMania-Final DECISION End by ~Assenders:iconAssenders:





“Final DECISION” – Script

Duo ex Mania

(Show #04)

Written by: Jeremy Sears

FIRST DRAFT:
06/07/08
SECOND DRAFT:


Script Terms
Ext – Exterior – Setting outside
Int – Interior – Setting inside
POV – Point of view – from characters perspective
CLOSE ON – Focusing on a body part(s)/object(s)
WIDEN ON – Zoomed out on a person/people/object(s)
OV – Over View
UV – Under View
SV – Side view
FV – Front View
VO – Voice over
OS – Off screen

FINAL ACT


OPEN ON

Ext. military base – day – hazy

WIDEN ON (OV) the military base as small tremor occurs followed by an explosion that bursts out from the right side of the research facility.

CLOSE ON (OV) a raid siren on the base as it begins to go off.

Int. research facility – random corridors

POV – end of the hall – Pocky and Jem make a sharp turn into this corridor and run towards the screen quickly just as a BIG explosion occurs in the corridor they were just in, sending several shoulders flying across the background comically.

WIDEN (OV) behind Pocky with Jem not far behind as she runs up the corridor with her arms spread out, opening ongoing Hammerspace portals on each side of her that cover the entire wall, doors included as soldiers open them to try and rush the two.

POV – behind Pocky – Pocky looks over her shoulder with a slight glare in her eyes.

Pocky
Come on Jem! Keep up the pace!

POV – Pocky – Jem runs as fast as he can, though looking very tired already.

Jem
Ok Pocky! But what’re you doing opening those Hammerspace Portals?

WIDEN ON (SV) Pocky running down the very long corridor with the ever-stretching Hammerspace portal forming in the background from her finger tips.

Pocky
What does it look like? I’m taking care of these dime-a-dozen grunts so we don’t get offered a free shower of hot led!

PAN back to Jem about 6ft behind her.

Jem
But where do they go if they walk into the portals?

CLOSE ON Jem’s face while he looks at Pocky (OS) worriedly.

Pocky (OS)
They’d be trapped in Hammerspace I guess, I don’t know!

Jem
Mm…

POV – right route of a corridor intersection – Pocky runs straight from the corridor she and Jem were just in, to the one right in front of her while soldiers can be seen swarming down the left route corridor in the background. Jem finally makes it to the middle of the intersection as Pocky jogs back to him backwards,

Pocky
No good!

Pocky looks at the soldiers coming towards them in the background

Even worse!

She grabs Jem’s hand and runs down the right route (towards the screen).

Gaaaaah! This way!

CLOSE ON Pocky and Jem as they run down the corridor quickly.

Damn it they’re fast!

Pocky blinks

Huh?!

POV – Pocky – REVEAL 10 soldiers all standing at the front exit of the research facility wearing elite gear and aiming their weapons at Pocky and Jem (OS).

(OS)
Oh come on…

CLOSE ON Pocky as she looks over her shoulder at Jem.

And hold on tight!

CLOSE ON Pocky and Jem’s held hands as she suddenly thrusts him forward.

(SV) Pocky pulls Jem in front of her with an arm wrapped around him as she LEAPS head-on towards the soldiers an opens a Hammerspace portal in front of them that they both go through. PAN left to the outside of the research facility as the other end of the portal opens a few ft away from the front door.

Ext. military base – day – hazy

CLOSE ON (OV) Pocky and Jem flying out of the portal and rolling across the ground to a stop.

CLOSE ON (UV) Pock as she sits up while on top of Jem and looks around.

Mm?!

POV – Pocky – PAN around to show the many, MANY soldiers surrounding Pocky and Jem as they stand ready to open fire.

CLOSE ON Pocky’s face while she looks more annoyed and bites on the corner of her lip.

Gr…

CLOSE ON Jem face while he looks up at Pocky (OS).

Jem
How’re we going to get out of here Pocky?

CLOSE ON (UV) Pocky’s face as she looks down at Jem (OS) with a smirk.

Pocky
Heh, don’t you worry about that, we got ride,

Pocky looks up at the sky.

JOSHUA!!!!!!!!

ZOOM OUT and PAN UP to the sky as the silhouette of a familiar buffalo towing storage truck rushes across the screen.

WIDEN ON (FV) a group of aiming soldiers as Colonel Miller runs up behind him and thrusts his right arm out at Pocky and Jem (OS).

Colonel Miller
GR…FIRE!!!

WIDEN ON (UV) Pocky and Jem from far away as Joshua SLAMS into the ground HARD, causing the ground around him to crumble dramatically.

Joshua
Moooooooo!!!

Suddenly Joshua is bombarded by THOUSANDS of bullets from all directions, only to have every one of them deflect off the barrier of his Main Character Shield, resulting in a huge frantic frenzy of sparking special effects.

CLOSE ON Jem while he has his arms over his head.

Jem
AH!!!!!!

Jem realizes he hasn’t been hit yet and looks around blinking.

Huh? What the…

POV – sitting behind Jem – Jem sits up and looks up at Jem while she stands up beside Joshua with her arm over his back.

Wait, when did Joshua have a Main Character Shield?

Pocky
Ever since he was established as a character that’d be in this show for more then 1 episode!

Pocky holds out her hand to Jem.

Now get on, this is the home run stretch!

POV – Pocky – Jem blinks once and nods.

CLOSE ON Pocky’s hand as Jem reaches up and grabs onto it.

Jem (OS)
Okay!

WIDEN ON (UV) Pocky as she hops onto Joshua’s back and pulls Jem up behind her.

CLOSE ON (SV) Pocky as she looks over at Jem.

Pocky
You good?

PAN back to Jem while he puts his arms around Pocky’s waist and nods.

Jem
I’m good

PAN to Pocky again.

Pocky
Great.

Pocky looks down at Joshua.

CLOSE ON Pocky’s left hand as she strokes Joshua’s fur.

CLOSE ON (SV) Pocky’s face while she smiles lightly.

Joshua De La Augustine…

WIDEN ON (FV) Joshua as Pocky raises her right hand.

GIDDIE UP!!!

CLOSE ON Joshua’s back as Pocky slaps it with her right hand.

WIDEN ON (FV) Joshua as he raises his head.

Joshua
Moooooooooooooo!!!!

CLOSE ON Joshua’s front hooves as he begins to charge forward.

WIDEN behind Joshua as he starts running towards the front gate while he continues to be bombarded by gunfire.

(SV) PAN behind the many soldiers in the foreground while they all try to shoot at Joshua as he makes his way to the front gate and just barges though, making his escape.

CLOSE ON (FV) Colonel Miller’s face as his eyes narrow into a glare.

Colonel Miller
GR…

WIDEN ON (FV) Colonel Miller as he holds his left arm out.

Prepare the helicopters! Everyone get out there! We can’t let that woman get away with the Dues Ex Machina power!

Soldiers begin running around Colonel Miller in a big frenzy while he turns to his right and walks (OS).

WIDEN ON Colonel Miller stepping towards a black hawk helicopter.

Chelsey (OS)
COLONEL!!!

CLOSE ON Colonel Miller’s face as he looks over to his right.

Hmm?

WIDEN ON Colonel Miller standing beside the entrance of the helicopter as Chelsey runs up to him in proper uniform.

POV – Colonel Miller – Chelsey pants a little, but then stands up straight and salutes.

Chelsey
Major Chelsey Tavarez, reporting for duty, sir!

CLOSE ON Colonel Miller’s face as he blinks and shows no real emotional reaction.


Colonel Miller
Hmm,

WIDEN ON Colonel Miller and Chelsey.

Well, get in it.

Colonel Miller gets into the helicopter as Chelsey lowers her salute.

Chelsey
Yes sir!

Int. helicopter

POV – in front of the passenger seat – Colonel Miller walks up to the front of the helicopter and sits in the passenger seat beside the solider that’s taking care of the controls while Chelsey gets onboard in the background.

Ext. military base – day – hazy

WIDEN ON the black hawk helicopter as it begins to lift off the ground.

CLOSE behind helicopter’s tail rotor as the copter itself rises higher and higher until it flies (OS), transitioning into the next scene.

Ext. downtown area – day – hazy

WIDEN ON (OV) the ruins of the city as Joshua can be seen running through the broken up roads, leaving his signature giant trails of dust in his tracks while a massive army’s worth of helicopters and ground vehicles come after them. ZOOM IN on Joshua, Pocky and Jem.

CLOSE ON (UV) Pocky looking over at all the helicopters flying above them.

Pocky
Mm…!

CLOSE ON (UV) Jem’s face while he looks over at the growing number of military forces (OS) as well.

WIDEN ON (OV) Pocky and Jem looking upward (at the screen) while Joshua keeps running.

Jem
More and more just keep coming…

CLOSE ON (FV) Reggie as he climbs up from the back of the storage truck and sits on the roof with a cup of chamomile tea in his wings.

Reggie
Um, excuse me Ma’am, but may I make a suggestion?

POV – over Reggie’s shoulder – Pocky and Jem both look over at Reggie.

Pocky
Whaaaaaaat Reggie?!

CLOSE ON (FV) Reggie while he somehow manages to stay perfectly still on the roof of the truck being pulled by a speeding buffalo.

Reggie
Well…you used your Hammerspace power to hop out of that research facility…so why don’t you do that again and send us to Africa or something?

CLOSE ON Pocky’s face while she looks over at Reggie (OS) and glares at him comically.

Pocky
Because doing the obvious solution would be lazy writing!!!

Suddenly she gets rocked around as Joshua’s Main Character Shield is hit by an attack much more powerful simple bullets.

WIDEN (OV) behind Joshua while his Main Character Shield is now being shot at by generate launchers from everywhere in the sky! PAN UP quickly to show Colonel Miller and Chelsey’s helicopter.

Int. helicopter

POV – standing above Colonel Miller – he looks over the canopy window and sees all the gunfire still just reflecting off the buffalo’s barrier.

CLOSE ON Colonel Miller’s face as his eye twitches with frustration.

Colonel Miller
GR…that damn beast’s shield is getting on my nerves…

CLOSE ON Colonel Miller’s right eye as it blinks.

Wait…

CLOSE behind Colonel Miller as he looks over his seat.

CHELSEY! Aim for the bottom of the truck that buffalo is towing!

ZOOM OUT to REVEAL Chelsey sitting at the edge of the opened side-door with a grenade launcher in her hands. Chelsey nods.

Chelsey
Right,

Chelsey puts the weapon over her shoulder.

CLOSE ON Chelsey’s face as she puts her eye against the scope.

POV – grenade launcher scope – the red crosshairs move around Joshua a bit and then to the back of the storage truck, shaking a little as she tries to hold her aim.

CLOSE ON Chelsey’s face while she bites her lip and begins to grow hesitant.

Mm…

POV – grenade launcher scope – the crosshairs aimed at the back of the storage truck shake more and more.

CLOSE ON Chelsey’s face while she bites her lip harder.

Colonel Miller
CHELSEY! Open fire on the back of the truck! That’s an order!

A tear slides down Chelsey’s right eye.

Chelsey
Mm…! Jem, I’m sorry!

Chelsey looks away with her eyes closed.

Ext. downtown area – day – hazy

CLOSE ON the grenade launcher’s trigger as Chelsey pulls it.

CLOSE ON (SV) the front of the grenade launcher as it fires!

CLOSE ON (OV) the back of the storage truck as the grenade hits right under it causing a BIG explosion that takes up the screen.

WIDEN (OV) behind Joshua as the storage truck EXPLODES, sending Joshua, Reggie, Pocky and Jem flying!

Jem, Pocky and Reggie
WHAAAA!!!

Int. helicopter

POV – standing behind Colonel Miller – looking out the canopy and seeing the big explosion caused by Chelsey’s successful hit.

Colonel Miller
Yes! Contact!

Suddenly a big piece of shrapnel comes flying at the helicopter.

Huh?!

CLOSE ON (UV) Colonel Miller’s face as his eyes widen.

Oh no!!

Ext. downtown area – day – city

CLOSE ON the helicopter from behind as the chunk of shrapnel smashes into the side of it, causing the copter to swerve out of control.

Int. helicopter

POV – Colonel Miller – the soldier beside him tries his best to gain as much control as he can to soften the approaching collusion while emergency alarms go off.

Soldier #4
Colonel!!! I’ve lost control! We’re going down!!

Ext. downtown area – day – city

WIDEN ON the helicopter as he crashes into the ground and slides to a screeching halt on it’s left side.

CLOSE ON (FV) the exposed bottom of the helicopter as Colonel Miller takes no time to crawl out of the wrecked machine and run (OS) with Chelsey peaking her head out shortly after.

CLOSE ON Joshua and Reggie spinning in the air comically.

Joshua
Mooooooo!!!!

WIDEN ON a big cloud of smoke as it clears to REVEAL Pocky crouched down (in front of the screen) on one knee like a ninja with Jem on his hands and knees behind her while Joshua and Reggie can be seen spinning/falling very far in the background.

Pocky
Hmmmmmm…!

CLOSE ON (right SV) several heavy military guns being raised.

CLOSE ON (left SV) several more heavy military guns being raised.

WIDEN ON (OV) Pocky as she stands up slowly and ZOOM OUT to reveal Jem and her are yet again surrounded by soldiers ready to fire.

CLOSE ON (FV) Pocky while she fearlessly looks around at all of the soldiers.

Heh! So this is what it comes down to huh? Well gimme your best shot!!

CLOSE ON (SV) a mini-montage of guns firing at Pocky (OS).

WIDEN ON (FV) Pocky as she swings her left arm low and then swings it around, forming ring of Hammerspace portals around her and Jem that shield them from all the bullets.

CLOSE ON (FV) Pocky as she boldly stands with her fists against her hips.

Ha! Is that all you got? Because I can do this all day!

Suddenly Pocky gets SHOT in her right shoulder and she spins around in pain.

~AH!!!!

CLOSE ON (OV) Jem’s face as his eyes widen while a gush of Pocky’s multicolored spews over him in the foreground in slow motion.

Jem
POCKY!!!

CLOSE ON (FV) Pocky as she leans over with her head down, holding her bleeding shoulder tightly while her Hammerspace portals close.

Pocky
G-G-GRrrrr…

Pocky raises her head slowly with her right eye hidden behind her hair while her left eye twitch.

POV – Pocky – Colonel Miller stands across from Pocky (OS) quietly with a simple handgun aimed at her while baring a stern, cold look in his eyes.

CLOSE ON (FV) Pocky as she lowers her head again and twitches with a rapidly growing anger.

GRRRrrrrr…who the hell do you think you are? Revolver Ocelot?

ZOOM IN on Pocky’s face and PAN to a side-view quickly as she raises her head and glares at Colonel Miller (OS).

WELL IT’LL TAKE MORE THEN THAT TO DEFEAT ME!!!!

WIDEN ON Pocky as she holds her right back, a Hammerspace portal forms at her finger tips and she thrusts it forward at Colonel Miller like a giant disc. PAN around to the other side of the Hammerspace portal to show it bounce off the ground once and flip towards Colonel Miller.

WIDEN ON (UV) Colonel Miller as he just stands there while the soldiers beside him all flee for their lives.

CLOSE ON Colonel Miller’s face while he looks up at the looming of the portal heading towards him (OS) while it’s shadow casts over him and he grits his teeth.

Colonel Miller
Grrrrrrrrrrr…!!

POV – standing behind Colonel Miller – he looks away and shields himself with his arms as the Hammerspace portal hits…his Main Character Shield!

CLOSE ON Colonel Miller’s face as he lowers his arms and looks up at the barrier holding back the portal with surprise.

Huh?

WIDEN ON (UV) Colonel Miller as the Hammerspace portal depletes to nothing and his Main Character Shield returns to an invisible state.

CLOSE ON Pock glaring with frustration.

Pocky
BULLSHIT! He’s got a Main Character Shield?!

POV – over Pocky’s shoulder – Jem gets on one knee while behind Pocky and looks up at her pleadingly.

Jem
Pocky! Just use the Hammerspace portals to get us out of here! PLEASE!

POV – Jem – Pocky looks down at him with a dark glare.

Pocky
~SHUT UP!!

CLOSE ON Pocky’s right eye as it widens and a deep heartbeat sound echoes.

MMM!!!

CLOSE ON (SV) Pocky’s feet as she falls to her knees and PAN over to her head as she falls onto all 4s coughing heavily.

(VERY harsh coughing)

CLOSE ON (FV) Pocky’s head while she raises her face slowly to face the screen.

God damn it…not again…

CLOSE ON (FV) Pocky’s right eye while it trembles slowly.

I have no other choice…

Her hair covers her eye.

CLOSE ON Pocky’s right hand as she raises it and puts her fingers together.

If I can’t have Jem’s power…

ZOOM OUT to an (UV) shot of Pocky on her knees and her left hand while she holds her right hand in the air.

THEN NO ONE WILL!!!

CLOSE ON Pocky’s right hand as she STABS it into the ground and bright throbbing light begins to shine out from the hole.

CLOSE ON (FV) Pocky’s face while she glares very deeply at the screen with her left eye while the light shines over her.

GRRRRRRRRRR…

ZOOM OUT to reveal a MASSIVE Hammerspace portal beginning to rise from the ground.

WIDEN ON (OV) the entire city as the edge of this massive portal rises from the ground.

(VO)
I’ll destroy this world!

WIDEN ON (OV) a random part of the ocean as the Hammerspace portal emerges from water.

(VO)
I’ll use my powers to send a thin slice of this it into Hammerspace!

WIDEN ON the entire Earth as the portal evenly splits the planet in half at an angle.

(VO)
And plunge this mud ball into it’s own destruction!!!

ZOOM IN quickly and CUT TO:

WIDEN ON (UV) Pocky standing menacingly with her head down and her right hand held out in front of the portal while wind blows around wildly.

POV – Pocky – Colonel Miller stands not far from her while watching her helplessly.

(VO)
I’m done with this world.

WIDEN ON (UV) Connie standing about one kilometer away from Jem and Pocky while she looks ahead with many other people at the ever-growing Hammerspace portal.

(VO)
I’m sick of everything about it!

(OV) ZOOM OUT from Connie and everyone around her slowly while they watch in silence.

CLOSE ON (SV) Chelsey’s face while her hair blows quietly.

(VO)
And I can’t wait to be inspired into the next one!

WIDEN behind Chelsey while she sits on the top of the tipped over helicopter and watches the Hammerspace portal ahead as the ground begins to tremble dangerously.

CLOSE ON Pocky as the entire planet begins to shake and Jem can be seen sitting with his head down in the background.

Because NOTHING will stop me from getting what I want!

ZOOM IN quickly over Pocky’s shoulder to Jem’s face as he raises it with his eyes widening.

Jem
Huh?!

ZOOM IN quickly on Jem’s right pupil.

ZOOM OUT to show Jem standing alone in the middle of a black screen while the camera PANS around him smoothly in all directions.

Chelsey (VO)
(echo)
You can take it as a traumatizing experience and grow to fear any kind of change, or you can take it as an opportunity to start things anew and undoubtedly for the better…

Connie (VO)
(echo)
The offer will always be available though…if you decide to take it…

Reggie (VO)
(echo)
I prefer to wait and anticipate when the time is just right to try another cup. Rather that then force myself to guzzle down cup after cup of the same tea and try desperately to recreate that marvelous experience that was originally unfamiliar to me…

Chelsey (VO)
(echo)
And very rarely is it ever too late to take the other route when you know you’re ready.

Jem FADES AWAY as a white feather twirls into the middle of the screen and suddenly the entire screen cracks like glass.

ZOOM OUT from Jem’s left eye while he sits jaw dropped.

POV – behind Pocky – Pocky keeps her back turned to the screen.

Jem (OS)
STOP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Pocky turns around quickly to look at Jem (OS).

Pocky
Huh?!

Suddenly a mighty invisible force hits Pocky, she closes her eyes tightly and tries to stand her ground but after a few seconds she’s sent flying back.

Mmmmm….! Ah!!!!!

WIDEN ON (OV) the downtown area of the ruined city as the powerful force obliterates Pocky’s Hammerspace portal.

CLOSE ON Pocky’s feet as she skids back against the ground. PAN UP quickly to Pocky face while she holds her shoulder.

Jem…! He’s unleashing his power!!

CLOSE ON Colonel Miller as he looks over at Pocky after hearing what she just said.

Colonel Miller
What?!

Colonel Miller looks ahead at Jem (OS).

CLOSE ON (FV) Jem’s face as he blinks once and his eyes begin to glow very brightly.

WIDEN ON (FV) Jem as strong gusts of wind twirl around him and his entire body starts to glow. He rises off the ground just as it began to crumble and then PAN UP following Jem as he shoots up into the sky.

WIDEN ON (UV) Jem as he stops in the middle of the sky and a giant pair of obscure wings made of light spread out from his back and wrap around him, forming a sphere.

CLOSE ON (SV) Pocky looking up while biting her lip a little.

Pocky
Mm…huh?

POV – sitting behind Pocky – she looks up at the sphere of light in the sky silently as two bumps begin to sprout from the top of the sphere.

CLOSE ON the bump on the right side of the sphere as it suddenly grows RAPIDLY, extending higher and higher into the sky, as it seems to break up at the end and form “fingers”.

Ext. space

WIDEN ON the Earth as the two halves of the planet literally begin sliding apart in opposite directions while a GIANT pair of obscure glowing hands spread out from behind it and begin to reach down for it.

Ext. downtown area – day - hazy

POV – sitting behind Pocky – everyone starts screaming loudly for their lives as this MASSIVE thumb of light comes down towards them

CLOSE ON (OV) Pocky’s face while her eyes narrow because of the blinding light.

Pocky
G-! GRrrrrrr!!!

FADE OUT WHITE

Ext. space

CLOSE ON the left glowing hand’s thumb as it grips onto the Earth.

WIDEN ON the planet Earth being held together by this giant pair of glowing hands that begin to slide it back together.

WIDEN ON (OV) the same ocean we saw earlier as the water crashes intensely while the planet is put back together.

WIDEN ON (OV) a random city as it’s shifted back in place.

WIDEN ON (OV) a random forest as it’s shifted back in place while one of the glowing arms can be seen in the background.

WIDEN ON the Earth as it’s restored to normal and the giant hands lift off of its surface and begin to shrink.

Ext. downtown area – day – hazy

POV – sitting behind Pocky – Pocky looks up at the arms sprouting from the sphere of light as they shrink down to about half the size of the city.

WIDEN ON (FV) the sphere of light as its arms come down and wrap around itself, merging together to form an even bigger sphere.

CLOSE ON (right SV) three angel wings sprouting out from the back of the sphere.

CLOSE ON (left SV) three more angel wings sprouting out from the back of the sphere.

WIDEN ON (FV) the humongous sphere of light as it spreads its six angel wings Suddenly the sphere itself compresses quickly and explodes into many waves of light.

CLOSE ON (SV) Pocky’s face as she looks away from the blinding streams of light.

Mmmm!!

Pocky looks up to the sky at sky as soon as the light clears with her eyes widened.

What the?!

CLOSE ON (OV) Colonel Miller’s while he speechlessly looks up at the sky with his eyes widened.

Colonel Miller
No…it can’t be… …

PAN UP slowly on a human-lion warrior in the sky, bold and muscular, wearing a silver chest plate with white front and back drapery and white sleeves on his arms while bearing 6 angel wings and holding sword in a sheath shaped like a snake in his left hand.

(OS)
That kid has reached the final state of Dues Ex Machina and has become a physical interpretation of The Creator’s soul! A six-winged lion warrior…a Leo Seraphim!!

CLOSE ON the top of the sword’s sheath, looking as though it’s swallowing the very sword it holds.

CLOSE ON the Leo Seraphim’s face while his mane gently flows in the wind.

CLOSE ON (SV) Pocky’s left widened eye. ZOOM OUT to Pocky’s face as she lowers her head and closes her eyes tightly.

Pocky
GRrrrrr…Jem…you used your powers to save the world…?

CLOSE ON (OV Pocky FLYING up incredibly fast towards the Leo Seraphim (OS) with pure yet hilarious anger all over off her face.

YOU BASTARD!!!!!!!

POV – Pocky – ZOOM IN extremely quickly towards the Leo Seraphim.

WIDEN ON the Leo Seraphim for a fraction of a second as Pocky RAMS into his Main Character Shield, causing in powerful bursts of energy to go flying everywhere!

POV – standing from far away – everyone screams for their lives as the intensity of Pocky’s opening attack causes tremors shake the ground and chunks of rumble to burst into pebbles while she chases the Leo Seraphim in the distance

SHAKING CLOSE ON (UV) Pocky’s face as she holds her arms over her head and glares downward.

RAAAAAAAH!!!!

WIDEN ON Pocky flying around the Leo Seraphim while she pulls out EVERY object she’s ever pulled from Hammerspace throughout the entire series (frying pants, bowling balls, bowling pins, remotes, DVDs, bazookas, the time machine and even a plush version of Plushzilla) and throws them at him only to have each deflect off his Main Character Shield.

Why would you bother saving this world?! It won’t have a reason to exist after this episode! It’ll only gain dust in the back of The Creator’s mind!!

CLOSE ON (FV) Pocky as she pulls out a giant hammer and holds it over her head.

RRAAAAH!!!

POV – Pocky – Pocky dropped the hammer down on the top of the Leo Seraphim’s Main Character Shield, causing a powerful burst of energy that blinds the screen with light.

PAN quickly to Colonel Miller standing slightly crotched while he looks up at the fight occurring in the sky (OS).

Colonel Miller
No, this isn’t any better!

WIDEN behind Colonel Miller while each clash Pocky and the Leo Seraphim make cause more tremors that shake the ground apart.

If this fight continues any longer it might tear apart the planet!

Pocky
~And who the hell ends a story using a happy ending anymore?!

POV – Pocky – the Leo Seraphim stops in front of the screen with his wings and arms spread.

(OS)
You’re a fucking horrible writer…

POV – Leo Seraphim – Pocky pulls a frying pan out of Hammerspace, thrusts it back and charges directly at the screen.

Whose clichéd work sucks the devil’s ass!!!!

POV – Pocky – BAM! Pocky’s frying pan smashes against the sheath of the Leo Seraphim’s sword as he raises it just in time.

CLOSE ON the top end of the sheath as the Leo Seraphim draws his sword.

CLOSE ON (UV) Pocky’s face as her startled eyes widen.

Huh?!

WIDEN ON (UV) a BIG explosion that suddenly occurs in the sky and Pocky is sent flying out from smoky cloud.

WIDEN ON Pocky as she smacks head first into the ground and rolls further back.

Ah!

CLOSE ON (UV) Pocky as she gets on her hands and knees and looks up at the Leo Seraphim (OS).

You turned me into a villain!

POV – Pocky – PAN around the sky, following the Leo Seraphim as he flies around so fast that he’s only a blur and then makes a quick turn and heads downwards.

CLOSE ON the Leo Seraphim speeding downwards quickly towards Pocky (OS) with its sword and sheath held back in separate hands.

CLOSE ON Colonel Miller while he watches the fight (OS).

Colonel Miller
Here it comes…

CLOSE ON (OV) Connie watching the fight (OS) with her eyes widened and her hands held together against her chest.

(OS)
The final attack!

CLOSE ON (SV) Chelsey’s face while she watches the fight (OS) with her mouth opened.

(OS)
The ultimate climax!

WIDEN (UV) behind Pocky getting up slowly while looking up at the speeding blur heading towards her in the sky.

CLOSE ON (SV UV) Colonel Miller’s face while he grits his teeth.

THIS IS IT!!!

CLOSE ON (OV) Pocky glaring upward while her right eye is hidden behind her hair and she holds her right shoulder.

CLOSE ON the Leo Seraphim speeding towards Pocky (OS).

CLOSE ON Pocky’s right shoulder as she grips it hard, causing more multicolored blood to squeeze out.

CLOSE ON the Leo Seraphim speeding towards Pocky (OS).

WIDEN (UV) behind Pocky as the Leo Seraphim stops RIGHT in front of her with his sword already held over his head in the grips of both hands and his 6 angel wings boldly spread out.

WIDEN directly under the snake-shaped sheath as it spin up into the sky.

POV – over the Leo Seraphim’s shoulder – Pocky’s eyes soften as she tiredly look before the face of the Leo Seraphim.

Pocky
Jem…

POV – Pocky – the Leo Seraphim raises its head slowly.

Leo Seraphim
My name…is Jeremy.

POV – over the Leo Seraphim’s shoulder – Pocky blinks and her eyes widen.

Pocky
Eh!?

The Leo Seraphim quickly swings his sword down on Pocky, slicing her in half!

(SV) ZOOM OUT slowly between Pocky and the Leo Seraphim while the end of his sword rests on the ground between her legs…

CLOSE ON (SV) Pocky as each half of her body collapses in opposite directions and SPEWS fountains of blood in every color. PAN UP to watch these fountains of blood spiral up into the sky and swirl together into one giant mess of color.

WIDEN ON (UV) the swirling mess of multicolored blood as a black base spreads out over the city sky very quickly while the other colors spiral within it.

CLOSE ON (OV) Connie’s face as she blinks slowly, watching all of this while a large shadow is cast over her.

CLOSE ON (UV) a several of the swirling colors as they form into planets and stars.

WIDEN ON (UV) the miniature universe that’s formed in the sky above the city!

Connie (OS)
A universe!

CLOSE ON (UV) the giant sun in the center of this universe as it suddenly implodes and turns into a powerful black hole.

WIDEN ON (UV) the entire universe in the sky as the black hole begins to suck in itself.

CLOSE ON (UV) Chelsey standing up and looking around as she sees rubble starting to lift off the ground and get sucked into the growing black hole (OS).

Chelsey
Huh?! What the?

WIDEN ON the overcastted city as everyone starts screaming while derby and things like cars begin to lift off the ground and head towards the black hole.

CLOSE ON Colonel Miller as he falls to his knees in defeat.

Colonel Miller
A self-destruct device…?

WIDEN behind Colonel Miller while all of the abandoned military guns around him lift off the ground and float up towards the black hole (OS).

CLOSE ON (FV OV) Connie standing silently while she watches the collapsing universe (OS) as people run past her screaming for their lives. Chelsey almost passes Connie but she turns around and tugs on her right arm.

Chelsey
Come on Miss! This is dangerous! We got no idea what’s going to happen!

CLOSE ON (left-SV) Connie while Chelsey looks over at her.

Connie
No. It’s going to be okay.

Chelsey
Huh?

Chelsey looks ahead in the same direction as Connie.

POV – Connie and Chelsey – the Leo Seraphim stands atop a small hill of rubble with its wings spread while it looks up at the collapsing universe.

CLOSE ON (UV) a couple planets getting sucked into the black hole that grows even bigger with each thing it “eats”.

WIDEN ON the universe as every remaining planet and star are sucked into the black hole and even the fabric of it’s own zone of space (the black base) begins to get sucked into it.

CLOSE ON (SV) The Leo Seraphim’s face while he quietly watches the universe collapse.

CLOSE ON (FV) Chelsey and Connie as they both watch the Leo Seraphim quietly.

WIDEN ON (UV) the universe in the sky as it’s completely sucked into the now giant black hole.

SHAKING CLOSE ON (UV) the black hole as it grows more and more unstable until it implodes…and turns into a dove made of pure light that flies downward (going OS).

CLOSE ON (FV) Chelsey and Connie as the dove gracefully flaps by them.

POV – Chelsey and Connie – PAN UP on the dove as it flies up towards the clear blue sky and breaks up into sparkles of light that fade away as they blow into the wind.

WIDEN ON (UV) the snake shaped sheath as it spins back towards the ground.

CLOSE ON the end of the sheath as it stabs into the ground.

CLOSE ON (SV) the sheath standing imbedded in the ground quietly. ZOOM OUT to reveal the Leo Seraphim standing 8ft from the sheath.
CLOSE ON Reggie’s face as he leans back, sipping a cup of chamomile tea…he pauses for a moment and then blinks with delight.

Reggie
(slirrrrrp)…mm! That was pretty good.

WIDEN behind Joshua standing at the edge of a small cliff side of rubble with Reggie sitting on his back while they watch the Leo Seraphim from very far away. ZOOM OUT a bit to show the destroyed storage truck resting at the bottom of the rubble behind them.

Care for some Joshua?

Joshua
Moooooo…

CLOSE ON the ground in front of Colonel Miller’s feet as he drops his gun and his military rank badges.

CLOSE ON (UV) Colonel Miller as he takes off his military jacket and throws it aside.

Colonel Miller
Bah, I’m not cut out for this stuff.

CLOSE behind Colonel Miller while he watches the Leo Seraphim in the distance.

Maybe I should just get back into making prizewinning stake sauces or something….

WIDEN behind Chelsey and Connie as they watch the Leo Seraphim.

CLOSE ON (SV) the Leo Seraphim’s face as he closes his eyes.

POV – Chelsey and Connie – the Leo Seraphim’s wings start to glow as its feathers drift off into the wind and fade away.

CLOSE behind the Leo Seraphim as he seamlessly turns back into Jem by the time the final feather leaves his back.

CLOSE ON (SV) Connie and Chelsey’s faces.

Chelsey
It’s over?

Connie
Sort of,

(SV) Jem silently walks up to the snake-shaped sheath with the Leo Seraphim’s sword still in his left hand.

CLOSE ON (SV) the head of the sheath as Jem slides the sword down the snake’s mouth…and as soon as the sword’s fully in it’s sheath – BLACK SCREEN

END OF FINAL ACT

EPILOGUE


BLACK SCREEN

Fan boy #1 (OS)
Another book? Already?

Int. Generic Anime Convention ’14 – autograph booth

POV – over Fan boy #1’s shoulder – a friend of his, Fan Girl #1 nods excitedly and holds up a manga to Fan boy #2.

Fan girl #1
Yeah! Can you believe it? Check it out.

POV – Fan boy #1 – he takes the manga and examines the front cover of the book titles “Assenders” with “Jeremy Bay” credited at the bottom as the author and creator while “Connie Null” and “Chelsey Tavarez” are credited as the illustrators.

Fan boy #1
“Assenders”…

CLOSE ON (FV) Fan boy #1’s face while be blinks.

…But the final volume of Duo ex Mania only came out like a month ago…that was fast.

WIDEN ON (SV) a group of four friends stand in line for autographs.

Fan girl #2
Oh come on! It’s been like that ever since they started publishing these books four years ago, it’s awesome!

POV – standing outside the line – looking at the people at the table ahead signing autographs, seeing the one at the end being a much older Jem.

(OS)
And can you BELIEVE he’s here right now signing autographs!?

CLOSE ON Jem smiling at one of his fans while he signs the inside cover of her manga.

CLOSE ON Fan boy #2 while he holds his chin and looks down a little.

Fan boy #2
Yeah…but I been thinking

Fan girl #1
Yeah? About what?

Fan boy #2
About Jeremy Bay…there’s been that endless rumors that he’s the one who has that “power” to do anything, and was the one who turned into an angel that saved the world six or so years go.

POV – over Fan boy #2’s shoulder – the other three blink and Fan girl #1 tilts her head.

Fan girl #1
Yeaaaah we all heard that rumor, your point?

POV – Fan girl #1 – Fan boy #2 keeps holding his chin.

Fan boy #2
Well if he has that kind of power…who’s to say whether or not he’s using his power right now to make everything that’s happening in his life right now possible?

Fan boy #1
Ha-ha! You dwell WAY to far into your crazy theories sometimes.

Fan boy #2
Huh?

CLOSE ON Fan boy #1 while he looks at the manga in his hands.

Fan boy #1
If you ask me, I think that “power” is just an exaggeration of the idea that everyone has ability to do anything they want with their lives if they set their minds to it. And besides,

POV – Fan boy #1 – looking down at the Duo ex Mania manga in his hands.

(OS)
Even if he is using his power, should we really complain? After all he looks happier then ever, especially when he sees how much we appreciate his work, and he’s giving us something enjoyable to read.

CLOSE ON (FV) Fan boy #1 while he stares down at the book.

So if you ask me, I don’t have a problem with it either way.

Fan girl #2 steps up behind Fan boy #1 and pushes him lightly.

Fan girl #2
Hey quit that moral of the day junk, you’re up next!

Fan boy #1
Huh!? I am?! Oh thanks!!

Fan boy #1 panics comically and dashes forward.

CLOSE ON Jem and Fan boy #1 as he runs up to the table. Jem smiles at him.

Jem
Hey there!

Fan boy #1
Oh god Jeremy Bay! You have no idea how much of an inspiration you are to me!

Jem smiles again and brushes some of his hair back.

Jem
Hehe, thanks, it’s always nice knowing I can help someone, even if it’s through my writing. So what would you like me to sign?

Fan boy #1
Oh, this please!

Fan boy #1 hands over the Duo ex Mania manga.

POV – Fan boy #1 – Jem takes the manga an opens it to the back cover, but before he signs the book he looks up at the screen and picks up the opened box of pocky beside his glass of peach juice.

Jem
Heh, Duo ex Mania…Oh hey that reminds me, would you like some pocky? It’s chamomile tea flavored,

BLACK SCREEN

(VO)
It wasn’t really my thing, but maybe it’ll be yours.

END OF EPILOGUE

THE END
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Author's Comments

Feels really good to finish something that i started.

Want some pocky?

Prologue & Act ONE - [link]

Act TWO - [link]

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Oh god Jem, I'm so happy you finished this! ^^

If I ever get good at flash, I'm gonna make Duo Ex Mania into an animation. I love the shots and all of it so much! ^^

tee hee, pocky!

Sure, I'd love some! ^^

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awwwwwwww hehehe ^_^' you seriously would? awwwww man thats awsome! thanxi SO much..your..like right now the one person who made writinf this series even more worth it.

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^^ *feels special*

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